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Twitter is twittering its way up to the top…
Above is the Twitter logo, which captures our hearts and controls our screens
There is a rise in the amount of Twitter users, more and more people are signing up to join the millions of people who like to post comments about random topics, including their thoughts and feelings. This is due to simple accessibility in which Twitter can be retrieved - through devices like phones or apps like Facebook.
But ‘tweeting’ has bad aspects like the possibility of anonymous viewings, by people who you don’t know because “this is asymmetric, unlike Facebook, which requires you to confirm a friends request before they can see your status updates”.
Although there are
numerous bad points about using Twitter, the popularity is growing “There are 100
million active Twitter users.” besides the duration of time spent on Twitter – “50%
of these 100 million users log in every day.” This
continuous attention means that Twitters popularity and recognition is getting more
superior, competing with big companies (for instance ‘Facebook’) – creating competition
between the social networking sites.
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